Some people think parents should control the behavior. of their children from a very young

正确答案：Parents Shouldn’t Control the Behavior of Their Children When it comes to whether parents should control the behavior of their children different people hold different views. Some people believe that parents should control the behavior of their children from a very young age. However others hold that they should give them more freedom. As far as I’m concerned I agree with the latter. To start with children have an eager curiosity about the world and a strong thirst for knowledge both of which are discouraged if their actions are always under the control of their parents. For example many parents limit online activities of their children say prohibit online chat and children gradually lose their interest in the network and even don’t bother to turn on the computer. In addition children may become timid when they grow up if their parents have godlike powers over their behavior. After all childhood experience plays a big part in shaping one’s character. Finally children may go to the other extreme if they don’t become coward that is to be rebellious against life and authority. And it is their usual practice to say no to the things they are asked to do when they grow to manhood. To sum up parents shouldn’t govern the activities of their children too much. However it is advisable to give them some suggestions in due time.
第一段借别人的观点亮出我的立场：支持父母应给孩子更多自由的观点。第二段详细阐述原因：父母过多地控制孩子的行为会抹杀孩子的好奇心和求知欲、造成孩子懦弱和叛逆的性格倾向。第三段总结上述讨论，结束全文。