Write a note of about 50 ~ 60 words based on the following situation: The final exam
Write a note of about 50 ~ 60 words based on the following situation: The final exam is over. You want to go for a picnic to relax this weekend and ask Lily, your best friend, to go with you. Write a note, asking whether she is interested and telling her your plan including the time, place, and things needed for the picnic. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness.
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正确答案：April 20 Dear Lily I think it"s time for us to relax. I know that you"ve " been under great pressures in the preparation for the exam so I wonder if you want to go for a picnic with me. I"ve found a wonderful place in the southern suburbs with waterfalls and streams. My brother and I have prepared everything and you only need to take a first-aid kit. Would you like to join us on Sunday morning? Yours Angela
April20DearLily,Ithinkit"stimeforustorelax.Iknowthatyou"ve"beenundergreatpressuresinthepreparationfortheexam,soIwonderifyouwanttogoforapicnicwithme.I"vefoundawonderfulplaceinthesouthernsuburbswithwaterfallsandstreams.MybrotherandIhavepreparedeverythingandyouonlyneedtotakeafirst-aidkit.WouldyouliketojoinusonSundaymorning?Yours,Angela