Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Ban

正确答案：A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan June 23rd Dear Sir/Madame I am writing to apply for your bank loan to support my studies in the next two years. I am a sophomore in ×××University majoring in Psychology. In the past one and a half years I have been studying very hard and won the second prize scholarship and because of my excellent organizing abilities I was elected chairman of the Students Union of my department. The tuition fee however has become a burden for me and my family. My father is a laid-off worker and my mother has a meager salary. It is beyond their ability to finance me through the remaining years of education so I decide to apply to your bank for a loan of 10000 yuan to relieve their financial pressure. This amount of money will cover my tuition fees in the next two academic years. I will take some part-time jobs such as being a tutor or a salesman after school and during the two vacations to support myself. I guarantee that I will repay the loan within one year after my graduation. I would be very much obliged if my application is granted. Yours sincerely Li Ling
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan June 23rd Dear Sir/Madame, I am writing to apply for your bank loan to support my studies in the next two years. I am a sophomore in ×××University, majoring in Psychology. In the past one and a half years, I have been studying very hard and won the second prize scholarship, and because of my excellent organizing abilities, I was elected chairman of the Students Union of my department. The tuition fee, however, has become a burden for me and my family. My father is a laid-off worker and my mother has a meager salary. It is beyond their ability to finance me through the remaining years of education, so I decide to apply to your bank for a loan of 10,000 yuan to relieve their financial pressure. This amount of money will cover my tuition fees in the next two academic years. I will take some part-time jobs, such as being a tutor or a salesman after school and during the two vacations to support myself. I guarantee that I will repay the loan within one year after my graduation. I would be very much obliged if my application is granted. Yours sincerely, Li Ling 解析：本文为书信体，首先要注意格式正确，最应该注意的是语言简练、逻辑性强。本文第一段以I am writing to apply for...开门见山地表明了作者写信的意图，接着对自己的学校、专业、专业学习和其他能力作了基本的介绍。第二段however一词引出了作者现在所面临的困境，紧接着so一词引出了申请助学贷款的目的及具体金额。结尾段作者用I would be very much obliged if my application is granted．总结全文并提出了作者的期待。