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正确答案：Title: The Pros and Cons of the Internet There can be little doubt that the Internet has many advantages. To begin with the Internet makes our life more convenient. We can keep in touch with friends through e-mail instead of the traditional post service. Many companies have offered the E-business services by which we can book tickets buy supper and enjoy the latest record of our beloved pop groups all through the Internet while staying leisurely at home. Furthermore the Internet makes our life more colorful. It provides us a new means to get a wide range of knowledge and information. We can also chat with different people exchanging ideas and making friends in the cyber space. However the Internet has also brought about many problems. Many people especially the children spend most of their time sitting in front of the computers playing net-games or chatting in the virtual world. As a result they neglect their study and work. Besides when people become too dependent on the Internet they tend to give up much social communication which is essential for mental health. In the long run this may give rise to more serious social problems. As far as I am concerned the Internet opens a window for me to know about the outside world. In spite of its defects I still believe that it is the Internet that boosts our civilization to an unprecedented height and that it will bring us even more benefits in the future.
本文作者紧紧围绕着提纲中的关键词好处和问题对因特网的利弊进行了充分的论述。观点明确，用词准确，上下文连贯流畅。如第一段，作者在大论点(advantages)下确立了两个小论点(makeourlifemoreconvenient和makeourlifemorecolorful)，并以此为要领，通过电子邮件、电子商务以及聊天室三个例子，阐述了因特网的好处。这样整段论述不仅观点明确，而且内容充实。另外，作者还通过关联词的运用(tobeginwith…furthermore)使该段层次分明。这样的写作手法还表现在段落之间的过渡。如第二段作者使用however这样的转折词使对立观点跃然纸上；第三段开始asfarasIamconcerned这一短语自然地将论述转向个人观点的表达。