With the rapid development of technology smart phones have swept the whole country leadi
With the rapid development of technology, smart phones have swept the whole country, leading to an overwhelming use of social media among people. Young and old, adults and children seen all around bury themselves into their cell phones and social media. Some embrace such a phenomenon while others frown upon it. Whats your opinion？ Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Influence of Social Media on Peoples Life You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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正确答案：The Influence of Social Media on People"s Life The year 2014 has witnessed an overwhelming craze for the use of social media in China via which people release share and exchange information ideas pictures and videos instantly almost across time and space increasing communication in a way while reducing deep and real communication sharply. On the one hand social media builds an open and multiplex relation network. It brings the once-close now living-apart friends closer by enabling people to track posts of their friends on the social media. People do get closer by showing concern appreciation and admiration for their friends via social media. It also polishes up the cognition mode of interpersonal communication—the instant update and timely sharing guarantee the exchange and impact of all kinds of ideas and opinions. On the other hand modern people seem to be swept off their actual life from these sitting next to them and get caught up in the endless updates and posts of those far away. This universal addiction to social media be it in the coffee house with a friend or the apartment with your beloved ones has blocked people from paying attention to what is real in their life. The virtual "perfect world" presented on the social media is like the "greener hill" which always seems to be better than the one you have. Hence problems will arise from such a mentality and social pattern. Social media like any other communication tool will definitely help those who know the ups and downs of it. Beware of both and make your choice.
TheInfluenceofSocialMediaonPeople"sLifeTheyear2014haswitnessedanoverwhelmingcrazefortheuseofsocialmediainChina,viawhichpeoplerelease,shareandexchangeinformation,ideas,picturesandvideosinstantlyalmostacrosstimeandspace,increasingcommunicationinawaywhilereducingdeepandrealcommunicationsharply.Ontheonehand,socialmediabuildsanopenandmultiplexrelationnetwork.Itbringstheonce-closenowliving-apartfriendscloserbyenablingpeopletotrackpostsoftheirfriendsonthesocialmedia.Peopledogetcloserbyshowingconcern,appreciation,andadmirationfortheirfriendsviasocialmedia.Italsopolishesupthecognitionmodeofinterpersonalcommunication—theinstantupdateandtimelysharingguaranteetheexchangeandimpactofallkindsofideasandopinions.Ontheotherhand,modernpeopleseemtobesweptofftheiractuallifefromthesesittingnexttothem,andgetcaughtupintheendlessupdatesandpostsofthosefaraway.Thisuniversaladdictiontosocialmedia,beitinthecoffeehousewithafriend,ortheapartmentwithyourbelovedones,hasblockedpeoplefrompayingattentiontowhatisrealintheirlife.Thevirtual"perfectworld"presentedonthesocialmediaislikethe"greenerhill",whichalwaysseemstobebetterthantheoneyouhave.Henceproblemswillarisefromsuchamentalityandsocialpattern.Socialmedia,likeanyothercommunicationtool,willdefinitelyhelpthosewhoknowtheupsanddownsofit.Bewareofbothandmakeyourchoice.