The first recognized Human Flesh Search dated back to March 2006 when netizens on Tianya
The first recognized Human Flesh Search dated back to March 2006, when netizens on Tianya Club collaborated and successfully identified an Internet celebrity named "Poison" to be a high-level government official. Ever since then, the Human Flesh Search was repeatedly deployed. Some people think it is a powerful way to acquire information usually difficult or impossible to find by other conventional means. Others hold that it might violate peoples privacy. What is your view on this？ Write an essay of about 400 words. In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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正确答案：Human Flesh Search Should Be Used with Caution Internet users once believed in privacy on the Internet saying that no one could know whether it was a dog or not who was chatting with you at the other terminal. However it"s no longer the case. With the human flesh search it"s possible now to trace an online ID to the person in the real world. The search is no doubt effective but in my opinion it must be used with caution for it indeed violates people"s privacy and it can also be misleading and dangerous. First the human flesh search violates one"s privacy and thus the means it employs will certainly break the law. The typical "human flesh search" goes like this: At first some private information usually a picture of the person(human flesh)being searched is posted on the Internet for others to identify in the real world. Then when the person is identified more information about him or her is revealed including the name whereabouts more pictures and contact means. This information illegally acquired published and spread greatly violates the right of privacy of the person searched. When thousands of netizens participate in the searching process there will be no privacy left in his or her life. Second the human flesh search can be misleading. It may start with a righteous mind and is meant to do justice but when one"s private information is spread without control through the Internet the nature of the search could change and the information could be used for illegal purposes. Some crazy netizens would use the information to threaten the person and his or her family. They send text messages call their private phones or even put up banners on the family"s house to protest against the searched person. The search thus becomes a weapon for personal harassment and attacks. It is then neither a help to solve the issue nor a method to do justice. It is only an outlet of collective psychological violence. Finally the outcome of the human flesh search can be tragic. The person being searched may have done something unusual or immoral but there is no reason for him or her to be humiliated by thousands of people on the Internet. In some cases so much private information is publicized that the person being searched is under great pressure. Both his or her normal work and life are completely ruined. Although in some cases the human flesh search has brought about favorable results of the issue concerned I still hold that however well-meant it may be it must be used with great caution. We should always guard against its potential side-effects.
这篇议论性作文要求对人肉搜索表达自己的观点，根据题目要求，文章的结构可安排如下：第一部分(首段)先反驳传统上对网络隐私的质疑，然后顺势抛出自己的观点：人肉搜索不仅侵犯隐私，而且具有误导性和危险性。第二部分分三个段落具体阐述人肉搜索的弊端：1．人肉搜索侵犯个人稳私：2．通过人肉搜索而获得的信息可能被非法利用：3．人肉搜索对被搜人造成身心伤害。第三部分(末段)指出人肉搜索虽带来便利，但因其存在严重的弊端，所以应该谨慎对待。